ext_23022 ([identity profile] johnny9fingers.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] johnny9fingers 2008-11-20 10:13 am (UTC)

But you have a point.
Alas, the process of composition when under the influence of legitimate and legal opiates is somewhat haphazard. Proof-reading never gets done.
Specifically, the end of the third line of the third stanza could do with one (a colon that is; or a semi-colon may be better).
I believe the expression of irritation at this point goes thus: "arse".

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