But you have a point. Alas, the process of composition when under the influence of legitimate and legal opiates is somewhat haphazard. Proof-reading never gets done. Specifically, the end of the third line of the third stanza could do with one (a colon that is; or a semi-colon may be better). I believe the expression of irritation at this point goes thus: "arse".
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Date: 2008-11-20 10:13 am (UTC)Alas, the process of composition when under the influence of legitimate and legal opiates is somewhat haphazard. Proof-reading never gets done.
Specifically, the end of the third line of the third stanza could do with one (a colon that is; or a semi-colon may be better).
I believe the expression of irritation at this point goes thus: "arse".